Some time ago I was attending a networking event — one of those venues where we had to go around the room and introduce ourselves. Most of us had been coached to say something like, “You know how people get stuck in debt and can’t seem to break free? And you know how families can be torn apart over money? Well, I have a process that can solve your financial woes in just two weeks.”
Then it was Marilyn’s turn.
Marilyn kept her speech short. She said very simply, “This one client who had massive credit card debt when we started. She didn’t know how she was going to pay off her bills, let alone fix her credit rating and become a homeowner. After a year of coaching with me, she’s debt-free and just last week she closed on her dream home.”
Everybody woke up and most of us asked for Marilyn’s card — even me, and I was already a homeowner. We either needed her help or we knew someone who did.
Marilyn had cut through the clutter, noise and boredom of a typical gathering of business owners. She did this by telling a short, deceptively simple story.
Marilyn’s story fits into the category of success story – a story about one of her clients, not about her own experiences. But she can use this story on her About Page as well.
In fact, Marilyn probably has a collection of stories about her business success. These stories not only help her connect with clients, but also help her answer two key questions that explain how she uniquely serves her market.
Stories help answer a key question for your positioning: What do you whisper?
We’ve heard of the “dog whisperer,” “horse whisperer,” and other whisperers. What are you the whisperer of? Marilyn could be called a “money
whisperer,” but it’s more helpful to be specific.
Call her the “debt reduction” whisperer. She can look at a set of bank statements and bills and see money flows.
Among other things, I’m the “About Page” whisperer. I figure out what makes you special and help you put words around it, so you sound professional and approachable. One of my favorite sayings is, “Brag does not have to be a 4-letter word.”
Are you ready to write or rewrite your About Page? Maybe your current page could be stronger, or you’ve just pivoted your business, or you’ve grown out of your old Page.
I am always delighted to write your About Page for you, as a one-on-one copywriting project. But you may prefer to write your own (“learn to fish instead of eating a fish”). Or you may be looking for a lower cost opportunity
Join me for the About Page hands-on, “get it done” workshop starting June 8. We’ll have live interactions (naturally we’ll record the calls so you won’t need to miss anything).
I hear from people who have been working on their About Pages for 6 months. You’ll get yours done in 4 weeks. You’ll be able to seize new opportunities that come to you because readers appreciate your value and realize what you can do.
Go here to sign up and claim the Early Bird bonuses. http://mycopy.info/aboutnew